Shot Blast

Written by Rob


It may not be to Emily’s taste, but it’s still a neat victory. Image // ABC Studios

Folk speak of watershed, a turning point, epoch, or pivotal moments. Of course, I understand that all of these could apply, but I think they are descriptions to “grab the headlines”. Viewed from my side, the events and trends that came before, made the moment inevitable, and everything that came after “business as usual”.

People like to moan. And there is little people like to moan about more than “the boss”. Derek Peterson’s staff had more excuse for moaning than most. He was moody, ill-tempered, badly organised, erratic, unsympathetic, aggressive and, not surprisingly, a piss-poor manager. But moaning, much as we like to do it, is wasted effort. If you want change, you need to make change. Moaning doesn’t make change.

Decide what you want, find your allies and understand them; recognise your enemies and understand them too; recognise what you can and can’t influence; take a conservative view of your effectiveness; make a plan and stick to it. Remember, a journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step; it’s not where you start but where you finish that matters; a drip of water will reduce a mountain to sand eventually.

The good news was that Derek’s peers didn’t like him much either. Asking around, probing and prompting, I found thinly veiled resentment amongst the management team of Derek’s access to the M.D., Jeremy Argyle. Just why Jeremy thought so highly of Derek was not only unclear to me but also to his peers in the management team. So potentially, all the managers were my allies. Derek’s relationship with Jeremy was both his strength and his weak spot: break that and he would be lost.

Derek had long been a champion of shot blasting. As business development manager, he liked to boast in all company literature that every piece of steel that left our factory had been thoroughly shot blasted before painting. He was right: it was a quality feature, and our finished cranes always looked better than our competitors’. But it also added to our costs, which made the sales manager’s task more difficult in winning work at a reasonable profit margin, and the production manager’s life more fraught, as shot blasting is very time-consuming. The quality manager didn’t like all the extra paperwork generated by every piece of steel needing a certificate. The plant manager didn’t like trying to keep our shot blast machine operational 24 x 7 x 52. Naturally, the finance manager didn’t like the cost. Maybe, I thought, just maybe, this is the issue that could be used to scupper Derek. But how to get Jeremy to both share the opinion of his managers and blame Derek for its adoption?

So I set about a system of sabotage. Nothing too dramatic to start with. Whenever I knew there was a crane going through production that was tight on delivery, I would temporarily cover the shot blast air intake, so the fan motor would burn out. Inevitably, the crane would be delivered late and both the sales manager and Jeremy would get an ear bending. These two would in turn be berating the plant and production managers. Working for Derek, I had an opportunity to “doctor” any customer feedback that related to paint finish or aesthetics, making sure that these issues were only mentioned in the negative, and that Jeremy saw the reports. I kept these tactics up for about eighteen months with reasonable success, but still I needed a killer blow.

We were bidding for a huge contract to supply thirty cranes to Walthams on the other side of town. Every crane manufacturer in the country wanted to win this order and the competition would be intense. I found a paint manufacturer who was marketing a new “no shot blast” etch primer product and took it to the production manager. He was keen, so I offered it to the finance manager to run it through the Walthams’s job estimates as a “what if”. The figures looked good. I knew Jeremy was a big pal of the M.D. at Walthams and that, provided we met the best price, we would likely win the order. I also knew that when the management team met, Derek would insist on the Walthams cranes being shot blasted, despite the chorus against from the other managers. That kind of stubbornness was a predictable aspect of his character.

I prepared a report in secret, outlining the business case for no shot blast production, the savings, the PR pitch, the partnership with the paint manufacturer. Then I gave a copy to each manager except Derek in strictest confidence. When the steel for the Walthams cranes was passing through, I contaminated the shot with oil. A week after the cranes were delivered, the paint started to peel off. Jeremy got an irate phone call from Walthams’s M.D. and called an emergency management meeting.

The rest, as they say, is history. Jeremy had been made to look a fool and Derek was gone by the end of the week. Two weeks later, Jeremy called me to his office to discuss the no shot blast paint idea and offer me Derek’s job. I feigned great surprise and accepted magnanimously.

Rob’s revenge HHC is certainly one that holds a fabulous performance. Revenge may be a dish best served cold, but there’s some heat packed in the building and construction industry, and it’s hidden behind the paperwork. Somehow we think Emily from Revenge would love the work set into motion by the narrator. If you liked Rob’s flash fiction, consider leaving a like, comment, or you can check out more of his work, including “Mirror, Mirror” and “Partridge“. 


  1. […] Rob’s HHC was written n behalf of last month’s theme, Pumpkin. It’s such a humorous piece, we couldn’t help but add this into November’s content. While it delivers on the HHC theme, it also gives a good spark in light too. And hey, since it’s in the spirit of Halloween, we’ve added in our very own Inkblots Pumpkin carving as the top image. The good news is we can add this to the Bonfire later, as it’s just started turning mouldy… er, lovely. If you enjoyed Rob’s piece, make sure to check out his other short stories such as, ‘Last Breath‘ and ‘Shot Blast‘.  […]


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